Yicheng Liu

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A great Fantasy alt-history

Read through two chapters of the story and found it absolutely marvellous! This is a great alternative-history fantasy story, with plenty of places that felt familiar and surreal.

One criticism that I currently have with the story is the unfortunate passive nature of the writing style. There's a bit of overall description than ongoing events in the first few chapters. Which, by no means, detract from the story, though it require more effort to invest interest since the first line didn't quite grab my attention. Real gem of a story otherwise. :)

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Good gem

Overall seems to have pretty sharp story with a descriptive writing style. Overall a lot of potential and the setting felt pretty genuine. Mostly well-formatted, with a few uncapitalised letters here and there, a tolerable level of spelling mistakes. Definitely worth a good read.

Not quite sure about the overall tone of the story and the creep factor though... :)

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