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Got It All

You got it all the twists, the turns, the drama, the action, the romance and the gory details. It was brilliant all you gotta do is spread it out some more and you've nailed it on the head.

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Wow

Wow just wow this story is really good and addicting.

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Good Book

It was I good book not like "It was good but could have been better" good but like "I'm just gonna sit down with this cup of coco and read a good book" good. Read and even the iciest of hearts will melt.

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So Addicting

This book is so addicting I can't stop reading it. No doubt about it read this book 10 out of 10 100%.

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Funny AF

This story is hilarious I was rolling on the floor laughing at all the twists and turns and "OH SHIT" moments. Definitely reading the next book,

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Kinky

This story is well thought out and set up brilliantly. It's super kinky so BONUS! keep on writing.

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First Time

It's my first time reading a Nalu spin off but I totally shipped them in the show so you got me sold on this story.

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It Was Good

I'm not going to say I loved it but I came pretty close to so I'll give you points for that. It was a good book short but good and I do have to say that it does need editing on a minor level but other than that it was good.

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Tips

Okay so I got a couple tips for you.

1. Write the dinner scene.

2. Get some steam up in here.

3. Details are key add more of them.

4. Make it longer (unless it was supposed to be a short story).

Other than that it was good.

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Three Words

Hot. As. Fuck
Read this book, it is simply brilliant. Major props to the Author.

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Sad Yet Beautiful

If you have suffered from a broken heart like I and so many others then you will be able to connect and understand this, it is beautiful and sad but it left me at peace when I was done.

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Awesome

It was awesome I loved it and I love all the Authors books. Keep on writing girl๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Happly Ever After

I. Loved. It!!!! I have never squealed so much in my life. I loved all the twists and turns and ups and downs, all then happiness and sadness, ALL the hot sense and romantic ones, all the drama and the romance. I loved the fact that I didn't just get walked through all the good and bright moments that lead to the "Happly Ever After" but it showed me the bad and dark ones and didn't hide anything. It was raw and emotional on both ends for both the man and the women not just for the women. The Author did an amazing job on this story and spared no gory detail which I appreciate. Read. This. Book

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First Time

It is my first time reading something this intense and all I have to say is....... WOW ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ I mean damn just damn I have very few words to describe how hot this is so I'll go with the ones I have.
Sexy.
Erotic.
Romantic.
Interesting.
Dreamy.
And DAMN good.
Props to the Author.

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Not Another Fairy Tale

Unlike a good percentage of the romances you see these days this is not a la de da fairy tale all the way through and that is one of the reasons I loved it, it had those moments where you just wanted to punch the guy for being stupid AF and those moments where your like "BOI!" cus of something the girl does and then those ones where you want to stop reading then your just like fuck it and keep going. I highly recommend this book. Author.... Keep on writing you have a bright future ahead of you.

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YAAAAASSS

Totally loved it. this book isn't for the faint of heart but it's worth it you can connect with the characters and it's all around awesome. I personally loved it and I think you will to....

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From Dark to Light

It was dark at the beginning but then it was heartwarming and oh so sexy and it made me all giddy inside

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Loved It!

I loved this book, it is simply amazing. Read it most definitely.

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HOLY FUCK BALLS!!!

Holy fuck balls I love this story. Yes, yes and yes. Read this book and you will feel the same. 100% YAAASSS.

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Beautiful!!

It was such a awesome story. I loved it, It help me and I'm sure it helped others realize how beautiful we truly are. It was just an all around beautiful story.

Read this story!!!!

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Good Read

This book is most definitely a good read, read this book. You wont regret it!!

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Top 10 Best

This is at least number four in the top ten best stories I've ever read!.

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Read

READ. THIS. BOOK you must read this it's a little dark at first but it is brilliant. Read this book!

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Best MR Spin Off I've Ever Read!!!!

This is a must read, it is addicting AF and is 100% brilliant. My highest praise to the author. Do not I repeat DO NOT stop writing EVER!!!!!!!!

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No Regrets

People think that these kinds of stories are strange hell I was one of those people but this book is genuinely brilliant and should be enjoyed by everyone. I have no regrets about read this book

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Sad Yet Brilliant.

This story was brilliantly written and helps us remember that not every story must end happily to save the world and for a story to be amazing.

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Yours, Raven

All I have to say is....... YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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Keep Going

Girl keep going write this story dont stop

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100%

Simply amazing. I loved it I love the world after reading this book I can relate to both of the characters. 100 out of 10

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SMASHING

THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY SMASHING 100% BRILLIANT NEVER STOP WRITING!!!

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Usually Not Into This Stuff

Okay, I'm usually not into this kind of stuff but this is actually quiet interesting and addicting.

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Great Book!!!!!!!

Great book. Girl keep working and never stop

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Another Great Book

I just finished "Ivy Gates" and this book is no different in my opinion I absolutely love it. Even though the start was rough I still loved it absolutely smashing, Keep up the amazing work

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BEST BOOK EVER

READ. THIS. BOOK you must it is simply amazing no not amazing it is astonishing absolutely astonishing it is brilliant the best book it is the most smashing thing I have ever read. Read it and you will see. Read it and you wont want to stop.

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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

AMAZIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lets Go Kick Some Ass Girls

No one hurts our girl!!!!!!

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Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Longer And More Detail

You did a good job but maybe make it longer and add more detail even if it takes longer I'm sure your readers would like it better and you'd get more readers

Oh!!!! and people hate it when you do the hole (Ten years later) thing no offence

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I CRIED

Okay. I never cry but after reading the ending I cried for like ten hours. MY FACE LOOKED LIKE A FUCKING TOMATO!!!!!!! I loved it so much

IN MEMORY OF

ALEXANDER IDK HIS LAST NAME

LOVING BROTHER, FRIEND, SON AND BOYFRIEND

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Awesome!!!!!!!

I love the back story and the characters I also love your other stories!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!

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Good Book!!

It was awesome to read and I loved it, But I think that the memory loss may have been cliche. Other then that it was a good book.

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Loved it!!!!!!

It was a really good story and I recommend reading it. I've all ready read it three times, I couldn't help my self

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props

I give this girl major props like seriously damn!!!!!!!!!!!!

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