Insριɾɑτιᴏn Sϵϵκϵɾ

Berlin, Germany

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Interesting but hard to read

Despite the interesting plot, it was pretty hard to decipher who is who and what is happening. As I mentioned in a few other comments, there are difficulties with the form and since you use no quotes it's pretty hard to understand when someone is talking or what's the setting. It just gets very confusing so I definitely suggest you work on that. If you edit it though, I am sure it will turn into an amazing story so keep going! 😉

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Unique and intriguing

The story is very unique and it's obvious you obtain a lot of knowledge when it comes to classical writing. I love the unique vocabulary that is used and I honestly think the writing style is even more captivating that the plot in on itself. I
I also really like the detailed descriptions and the thoughtful names and speeches. It's clear to me that the story is not just a first draft but a well-proofread book. That also made the experience very enjoyable.
At first, I was a bit confused by the plot and what was really happening but after reading a few chapters everything became clear. And don't get me wrong, even the parts I didn't completely understand were very intriguing and kept me at reading so that's another positive aspect.
If I have to be completely honest, the only thing I would criticize would be the choice of cover. I know design is not everyone's strength but I personally wouldn't have even started reading this book if I'd just randomly stumbled upon it. I would recommend to work on that but otherwise, this is definitely a story worth checking out!

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Interesting and Unique Story

I apologize for the delay because it truly took a while to read this story. I'm still not completely finished but I felt the need to express my feelings as of now.
First of all, the general description of the story is very eye-catching and intriguing, so I was pretty hyped up when I started reading. The beginning seemed mysterious and I enjoyed the details on each scene but to be honest, since I'm not really into mangas and comics, at times I felt like this particular story wasn't aimed at readers like myself.
The love story was sweet and awoke my interest once again since I'm a sucker for romance, so you've got me on that but I must admit, some aspects were confusing and there were chapters which never seemed to end. I would suggest shortening them up to create more clarity.
All in all, you have a pretty unique plot (especially with the fairies) and I really liked your writing style up to the few critics I just mentioned. I have a few chapters left and will surely comment once I see how it ends.
Great idea, keep working on it! :)

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Definitely a favorite!

This story made me read the whole series. I love everything about it but most of all, I appreciate the author's creativity! Definitely something everyone should take a look at! ❤️❤️❤️

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Interesting

I'm usually not the biggest fan of poetry so I am definitely not the best judge but I liked the rhythmic style you used. That made the writing flow easier to follow. Still, at times, it felt like you were using a certain word just because it rhymed and not really to fit it. That left me confused with the context so my suggestion would be to be a bit more descriptive when it comes to those things. Some poems were really too short to get the point of and I understand that long ones intimidate you but I really believe this would improve their quality. You should also definitely proofread some of them and check the spelling and grammar. Overall, it's obvious you put a lot of your heart into the writing, which makes your work very relatable but there is room for improvement.

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Great story

The plot is very nice and the emotions are easy to relate to. There are a few grammar mistakes that could be fixed but otherwise it definitely is a great story worth checking out!

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