Interesting and Unique Story
I apologize for the delay because it truly took a while to read this story. I'm still not completely finished but I felt the need to express my feelings as of now.
Read the story now
First of all, the general description of the story is very eye-catching and intriguing, so I was pretty hyped up when I started reading. The beginning seemed mysterious and I enjoyed the details on each scene but to be honest, since I'm not really into mangas and comics, at times I felt like this particular story wasn't aimed at readers like myself.
The love story was sweet and awoke my interest once again since I'm a sucker for romance, so you've got me on that but I must admit, some aspects were confusing and there were chapters which never seemed to end. I would suggest shortening them up to create more clarity.
All in all, you have a pretty unique plot (especially with the fairies) and I really liked your writing style up to the few critics I just mentioned. I have a few chapters left and will surely comment once I see how it ends.
Great idea, keep working on it! :)