Colette Caron

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I love the idea of the story. It is unique and in a world were are ideas have been done millions of times, that is saying a lot.
I like the style of the story, but I would like it to lead to something.
It is fine to show how the curse affects her, but I would like to move on to either breaking the cure, learning to live with it or falling in love with Shawn...

I deduct a point for grammar - always something to correct.

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I only read the first chapter, but I love it so far.
I like the plot of the story, and the writing style.

I want to read the whole story and look forward to the unraveling of the plot,.

As always I deduct a star for grammar. There will always be one or two little corrections, that even a editor sometimes misses.

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I love the story so far. it is very intriguing.
The blurb really grabbed me.

I have only one query and it may be trivial. The way you describe the wife - fair dark... I think you mean a beautiful dark woman.
Fair, for me, means light of complexion. It may only be me.

I deduct a star for grammar because there are always things to correct, but I don't want to get into this. A good story with grammar mistakes can be corrected and will still be good. A bad story with perfect grammar will always remain BAD.

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