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I want more!

Yeah I liked it. Can't wait to read more. They did the cool-guy walk. I don't know what that is but I can imagine. I like the voice you took on for the main character. You really made me believe it was a child speaking. At the start of the story though where the blind kid was talking, now, I don't know if little kids talk like that but who knows call kinds of stuff comes out of kids' mouths so still believable. I am sure as the story picks up I can bump that 2 star plot rating to a 3 star. Good story. Looking forward to Chapter 4.

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Truth, Thought and Memory

This was a very good story. I like how you made truth, thought and memory into something specific. Are Truth, Thought and Memory a place or maybe an idea? By the way the ‘storyteller’ suggests Truth, Thought and Memory is most likely people or maybe even one person.

My favorite bit in the Memory Chasers was: ‘ “We’re not telling you,’ said Rena. ‘Why should we? We’ve just met you. My brother only knew you for, what, two days tops? He might find you harmless, bless his trusting heart, but I see no reason.” ’

But is opening a school for wizards the best idea? I think this course of action will only bring Truth closer and we all know what happens when they got too close to Truth . . .

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