Tielman

Bloemfontein south africa

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Enjoyable read

well written.enjoyed the plot.good twist on the zombie genre...see no reason why author shouldnt get a publishing deal.his writing style is well above average.well done.Looking forward to reading more books from this author.

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Dissapointed

I am disappointed... In the fact that this turned out to be a short story. I enjoyed the plot and where the author was going... I didn't want the story to end. Well done.. Hopefully the author can turn this into a full length novel.. A novel that I would also love to read.

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Thought provoking comedy

This was indeed an enlightening book to read.The author offers various comical yet thought provoking scenarios of what it means to be a sinner on earth and in hell.The protagonist evan gives one a glimpse of what Neil gaimans lucifer might have experienced when he came to earth.A comical read with thought provoking concepts...a must read for all.

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interesting plot but needs work

It is a good attempt.Story has potential.Author needs to refine the writing though.The old addage of show dont tell apllies.One or 2 spelling mistakes.I suggest putting it through a couple of online editors and then to repost it afterwards.Once again the story has potential.Good luck

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enjoyed the plot

i enjoy reading short stories by roald dahl and stephen king...I would give this one a 3 out of 5.the writing style can improve a little.other than that i enjoyed the read.well done.will read more of his short stories if available.

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great read.dont miss out on this one.

loved the book.hope you will too...not your average ordinary zombie apocalyptic tale.Jakes is a likeable character and you keep rooting for him and danielle to get together.looking forward to the next installment of this quest.hopefully it will be available in hardcopy asap.

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