I'm pretty free spirited, with a huge imagination and decided to use that imagination and try to express it in words.

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Slap of reality

As I read the chapters, I empathized myself with your poem. People tend to think about these kinds of things; your description of those feelings and thoughts within your book made me feel the slap of reality in a more pleasant way.

The only constructive criticism I have is to revise the grammar (there are a handful) and the small spelling mistakes.


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