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Wicked Little Thing

Splendid story so far! Almost done with Chapter Two, and I can already feel a good amount of character development. The plot feels a tad cliche, but Kassidy does a great job at making it feel original.
As for writing from the perspective of the main character, I feel Grin is trying too hard to make himself seem evil. A lot of excess puffing of the chest, if you ask me, but that's just my personal opinion. Maybe that's just a vehicle for the satire on religion. I love the references to Biblical stories and other historical events, however; the Caesar remark was quite keen. All in all, I can't wait to read more of this story! Good on ya, Kassidy!

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