Pam Nelson

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Solarian down

Very insteresting story. The adventure ~craving spirit kept me turning the pages. The beardog held my imagination of what he was like. I dought you would gain his griendship with a stesk. He also must have been trainable. I did got loss during the last of the story when new characters were introduce to the story_line.

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Interrupted journey2

The best adventure. I have read in six months. Story line very believable. Action packed.

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Rivers crossing

The first few chapters hooked me, by River"s choice of brake from her medical training. That she should have planned her trip into the wild west is proven by the diasters that occured. She needed rescued, but Keith seemed to fall short when it was her heart that needed the most care. Yet in the end He was just what she needed. The military~stuff was kind over my head but provided some suspence

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Crises on the ice

Excellent adventure story. I have read several other like this. The facts of this place holds true to what I know of this area. I will never go to such a cold place, so I enjoyed reading about it. The mystery of what will happen next kept me turning the page. I especially liked the way God was included. The Chinese custom of ending their on life to save honor, had a wonderful end. The relationship which developed between the Chinese scientist and American scientist should be a moral lesson to all.

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Under mary's oak.

I have read thousands of mysteries. This rates among the top of ' who done its'. The plot was steadly going forward, at the same time developing new twist and turns.

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The may murderer

Nice start. Characters development good. Plot is interesting. Will be looking for the finished version.

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Windhawk tale

I truely enjoyed this book. The noble hawkwind who took her pledge seriously, to protect the humans. She faced each challenge along the way fearlessly. She never loss sight of her goals. She relied on the history to obtain a future, although

the past had tradgedy; she learned from it.

I also appreciate how though there were diferences in each other; all were treated with grace and mercy.
Grace and mercy is sadly not practiced in
areas of humans today.

The ending was rather tedious and I found need of pencil and paper to write the different lines down. I'm thrilled to know there is a sequel planned.
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The letters

Liked the movement until this last section at the bar. I thought she was savy, and would not give in so easily. Granted she was drinking, maybe she should not drink with potential suspects.

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