Scary as hell
The beginning was very decent and laid down a sold base for what was coming next. And the story got better and better and yes scarier too. I also liked the end. It wasn't soothing or pleasing, it was even more scary. So overall for a horror story, Forgotten Promise really stands out and hooks the reader. I liked your writing style too. It felt natural. Real.
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Another thing that I would like to mention here is that apart from the normal scare routine, this story had a deeper meaning. One's own past relationships, promises and dead loved ones have the capability of haunting a person forever. And that is what makes this story special.
I invite you to read my new psychological thriller CAGED and give your inputs on it. I hope you'll enjoy it. Here's the link https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/74886?preview=true&ref=a_96331dba-3111-456a-80d7-b0590e521345