Nicole

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Silhouette Has Great Potential!

This story reads like beautiful poetry. It is full of description, detail, and a warm pacing. I do wish that the intriguing hook that comes in, in chapter 5 was introduced faster because I think this would give the author the hook he needs to lure more readers. The writing gives a very warm family-oriented vibe. It makes you feel safe as you read the light and loving dialogue between the characters. The writer's attention to detail does so much to aid in the descriptions of the scenes and the characters. It is obvious this writer takes care of his characters and thoroughly thinks each of them through and is committed to getting them across correctly. I'm eager to read the rest now that the last chapter hooked me. :)

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Inspiring, intricate, and engaging

This writer has a talent for description that becomes apparent from the first few pages. He weaves in backstory effortlessly, although at times it is a lot to take in. That being said, that’s the only critique I have for this phenomenal novel.

The message/theme is like a strong fire during a crisp wintery night. It draws you in eyes wide and skin tingling for it to never end.

The characters are strongly written. I appreciate the attention to detail in each character’s backstory, inner conflicts, and relationships. The story unfolds and nothIng feels forced or too cookIe-cutter, whIch I’ve seen on thIs sitw before

This is not the genre I typically read. Although if I see this author’s name on anything I would grab it in an instant. This author should be published. So many readers want and deserve this caliber of a story.

Great writing. Very impressed!

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Sweet, and Moving

This is a very well written story. I love the unique idea. It is both simple but beautiful at the same time. My favorite part of the story aside from the beautiful dialogue was the double message of kindness and faith. Without giving away the ending...I love how the "pieces to the puzzle" fell.

The pacing of the story was perfect. I kept turning the pages with a smile on my face. I hope the author continues and makes this a complete novel. I will certainly be reading it. I am very particular about the pacing of a novel. I don't want to be slowed down by too much description. I also don't want to feel so rushed with too much dialogue. This writer gave me exactly what I wanted and made the sweet story so delicious-and left me wanting more!

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Intensely Satisfying!

I really hope the author writes more! It would be CRUEL not to. :) I haven't enjoyed a story this much in a long time. The writing is flawless, except for a few grammatical mistakes here and there (nothing an editor couldn't catch). The dialogue, descriptions, plot, and pacing are all on point! I read all six chapters in one quick sitting. You instantly connect with the MC and are drawn in deeper and deeper with each chapter. Effortless reading and intensely satisfying!!! Well done! Some of the best writing I've seen on Inkitt!

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Heart-pounding start!

What a talent this writer has for description! Every detail leaves the reader fully satisfied and engulfed, but the intriguing plot...keeps you wanting more!!! The story is unique, and I think brings a whole new perspective to the family's culture and religion that is not seen in the horror genre (not that I've seen). I really hope this writer finishes this novel because I will definitely be reading it!

Pacing, and dialogue are nicely done too.

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Fresh and exciting!

I liked this book a lot. Great new and fresh concept! I enjoyed the plot and characters. I wished certaIn characters got together” sooner and more frequently. I would’ve loved to have seen the different dimensions of his love towards her. It would’ve made the truth,discovered later, even more powerful. Great job author! Really enjoyed this. I kept turning the pages swIftly each night I read.

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