Miguel Angel Ojera

The Star Builder legacy is ever expanding and ever growing. All my stories revolve around lost treasures left behind by the thought to be extinct race

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Intense!

This story is pretty intense from the get go, there really isn’t a build up. It kind of just starts running and never looks back. The story itself is pretty interesting a girl discovers she’s a witch and forced of evil are on the look out for her. That doesn’t give this story justice though because I think it has a very fast pace plot that keeps me on the edge for most of the story so far.
Really the only down side is the grammatical stuff that was driving me up the wall at times. I also upload my stories raw and unedited so I’m not trying to be the grammar policy but at times it was getting a lot of my attention and saying to myself man if this was written the right way it would be so much better. But other than that it’s pretty awesome

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Cool story

Overall this story has a lot of potential. It has a lot going for it. It’s kind of (to me at least) has this sort of shounen anime sort of feeling to it. It isn’t bad by far but I’m a huge anime fan, so that’s always good. I’m not saying that it is like that but that’s kind of what it reminded of. There’s a lot of action in here and I really like how all the characters seem to interact differently with each other and seem to flow and I can see each character and how the specific way they act seems to be the way you kind of expect them to act. I definitely want to see where the story goes.

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Cool story

Overall this story has a pretty cool idea to it. It’s almost like a MIB meets X-men meets a time traveling story. I really like the main character she’s such an interesting character that feels snobby but at the same time you feel like you can relate to her.

The one downside is that there seems to be a lot of words missing here and there and it really grabs your attention away from the story. That and the grammatical errors also grabbed my attention not trying to be the grammar police but it’s really noticeable at times. I think if that gets fixed this book can go a long way.

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Unique

It’s been a while since I read a story that has this sort of format to it. In fact I can’t think of any kind of story off hand that is written in this matter, well not anything that is not written by writers like Dante Alegeri (sure I butchered that spelling probably ).

The poem-style format of this (so far) is a breath of fresh air when everything now-a-days goes for prose this has been a very interesting to read. So far it almost feels like reading a song (if that makes any sense) bedsides that the story is pretty nice has a sort of serenity to so far. I’m actually not one to read this sort of stuff but so far I’m glad I did well done

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Pretty neat

This was a total twist to the traditional Cinderella story. It had its call backs to the story everyone knows and loves but everything else was similar yet twisted in someway. Even Cinderella herself was twisted.

I think the thing I really liked was all the call backs to what you know and love, there was just so many Easter eggs I guess you can call them that it took me a bit to recognize some of them. Good job on this retelling of the traditional tale.

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Interesting

This is an interesting story taking place from the point of view of animals which I thought was cool. It was also neat how I was not the only one with the unique names in my stories.

The only downside was that it was a bit hard to follow. I can’t tell if that’s because of grammatical errors or if it’s because of too much information in the same paragraph at times. I think if that gets sorted out then you can have a pretty unique story in your hands

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Great Read!

As a Werewolf aficionado myself and fellow writer I really like this story because it is not a cookie cutter werewolf story. It does have your typical stuff in it that makes it fall into the genre but everything else about it is pretty awesome.

The rogue werewolf of Mira is pretty unique because she does not at all (that I have seen at least so far) fit into the typical mold you are used to when referring to a werewolf. Really the only down side is the few grammar stuff that drove me kind of up the wall, but I also upload my stories raw unadulterated and unfiltered so it was like meh to me and can obviously improve but who am I to criticize as I am not the grammar police.

I am really looking forward to the rest of the story because it really flows. It is a very good read

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Awesome!

Without spoiling too much, this is a pretty awesome story. I like the main character of Dean and his bid to control his dark side by doing the “dirty deed” so to speak. Really the way to describe it is Supernatural meets Angel (but he’s a demon not a vampire) meets something on the order of maybe Lord of the Rings maybe?
This story really has it all from werewolves, to witches, to faeries and this dude named Bob, which I was not totally sure what he is but part of him screamed Gandalf to me but that’s my opinion. I can’t say enough about the story besides the fact that keeps getting more and more intense and just when you think it’s finally done for now it kicks off with a new turn and that keeps happening all the way to the end. I really enjoyed the story and I am looking for the next one in the series.

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Pretty Awesome

I have to admit that usually I don’t pick up books like this but I decided to give it a whirl because of the pretty cool premise. This story has a pretty awesome idea. The idea of having a third party contender versus the gruesome twosome deal. The character of Clint is such a gruff yet like able character I wish would exist in real life. If we had a candidate like him stand out I think we could go a long way with someone like that who is a break from the traditional Democratic or Republican facade.
The author really knows the whole scene of the current political mumbo jumbo and the ins and outs of everything. It really feels like you are seeing everything that can probably happen in an election and that I think is pretty awesome. Take it from a guy who normally doesn’t pick up stories about that sort of thing often this is a great read for anyone who likes a suspenseful and intriguing stories. Keep up the good work!

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Good storytelling

This story reminds me of the show Zoo, which is not a bad thing. I liked that show, it had a good storyline and dealt with a similar topic of mutated animals attacking people. But I like this story a bit more, the main character is pretty cool and sticks to her guns (so far). It’s been a good read so far can’t wait to see where it goes!

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