The Adventures of Emily Tual, Book One
The storyline is good and the plot is strong. However, I did notice a few technical errors in some parts of the book. There were some problems with verb tenses and some sentences that were not completely clear. There were some areas of incorrect word usage and some missing punctuation,
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For example; In one chapter: the word 'then' was used instead of 'than' when comparing tasks for Bastet and another character.
If those were corrected and clarified, my rating would be higher.
Aside from that, the storyline is rather compelling and dramatic. I would consider reading the sequel when it is posted.
Nice work to the author!