A Book with Great Potential
It's early days to write a definitive review but several things are immediately clear. Here we have a writer who can capture the essence of a scene or a character in a few sharp, well-constructed sentences. The protagonists leap from the page, fully-formed and three dimensional. The dialogue is very natural and flows beautifully, driving the narrative forward and revealing even greater depths to the characters. The plot is intriguing, totally believable and engrossing. Yes, it needs a few revisions here and there, a close edit, a certain tightening of the prose, but the qualities this author shows make this no more than the natural progression of professional writing. I wish the author every success with this and will return to follow the story as more appears.
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