Laycra Macrae

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The Opal Wolf

I think you need to take a look at the grammar and punctuation in your story. I’ve noticed some mistakes in your writing and these have begun to make the story harder to follow. I think if these are worked on your story could be even better. I look forward to seeing where this story goes. Keep writing!

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Good Read!

I really like this story! The author had already got a tear out of me from the first chapter. I also think that there are some very likeable characters in the book that you can fall in love with really easily. There are a few punctuation errors but these can be fixed quite easily. This was great to read and I definitely recommend giving it a try!

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Great Work!

I have read 5 chapters of your story now and I am absolutely loving it! I was so engrossed in the story I forgot that I was reading to review the book. As a lover of all things werewolf and fantasy, this book-for me at least- definitely ticks all the boxes. I’m definitely going to continue reading!

The only slightly negative thing I’d like to say is that for people who don’t know a lot about the werewolf genre it might be hard to understand some ‘terms’. Eg. What a mate is to a werewolf. I think if in someway you described these ‘terms’ then you could attract a bigger audience of those who don’t necessarily read werewolf books. (This is just my opinion though)

This story is great and I definitely recommend reading, especially if you are a lover of werewolf stories!

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Melons and Emeralds

I think this story is a great read! It’s mysterious and intriguing, making me want to read more. I especially love Devin, I like how he’s mature for his age but still has the fears of someone his age, like when he’s worried about meeting Sheila. I just like the balance of his personality. I definitely will be reading more!

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Loving it so far!

As soon as I started reading I was hooked. I like the author’s writing style a lot and I really like the main character’s personality. The book is very mysterious and I I can’t wait to see how the rest of the story plays out.

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Great read!

As soon as I started reading this book I was hooked. I love the authors writing style which is very immersive and although I don’t really know the plot of the book I am captivated by the story so far. I am eager to find out how the rest of the story plays out. I would definitely read this book!

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Great story!

I really like this book! Your writing is very immersive and allows the reader to create a clear image in their head. The story isn’t completed so I can’t really say much in the plot but I like the story so far and I am eager to read more. I definitely recommend reading this book!

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Good so far!

So far I am liking the story! There are only a few chapters uploaded but the storyline seems to be going in a good direction. I think you’ve worked well to create the world your story is set in however with everything that is happening, I think the main character would be a little more careful about the info he tells to others about himself. I think the story has a lot of potential and I look forward to reading more!

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Great Read!

I love this book! Throughout the whole novel I have been captivated by the plot and kept wanting to read more! I have literally stopped reading just because I don’t want to get to the last chapter. I definitely recommend reading this book!

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Fantastic!

This book is amazing! I love how the story is written and right from the first chapter have been hooked. The only reason I put 4 stars for the plot is because I don’t know the whole story yet but I look forward to finding it out!

~Laycra

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