laurisadavey

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Detailed

The story is full of detail I feel when I read it that I am living it amazing would definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a thriller that will give you chills

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Good plot

I like how you structured your story very show and not tell your way with words makes me want to read on very good detail and the paragraphs and sentences just flow making it easy to read

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Good

When I started reading I wasn’t really drawn in by your words I wasn’t instantly wanting to learn more it’s you grammar is good and I like the way you put a new twist on an old story

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Awesome

A very mysterious novel you open the book and right away there are intriguing mysteries that pulled me in your good with words and I was drawn by the creative words that left suspense on the pages

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Falling or flying the far

I’ve only just started reading this extremely detailed story but already I’m hooked. At the beginning you are eager to flip the page you know what’s happening but you don’t at the same time with twists and turns around every corner this book is a great read. Only a few spelling errors so far nothing an editor won’t fix overall I would recommend this tragic yet mysterious journey to anyone.

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Wow

I love how you left suspense and I can’t wait to read more the detail made me shake as I was taken to the nightmare of this girls life. This is definitely something I would recommend

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Taming the devil 18+

I think this is a very detailed story with a clear story line. A great read with some pretty intimate details that make me feel like I am part of the story.

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Good writer

Your writing style is very good the book doesn’t drone but does have description and detail. Your sentence structure and paragraphs are well placed and easy to read, well done.

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Very good detail

From what I can gather so far this is a story about maps and booby traps and things desert mystery. I personally don’t usually read this sort of thing but I really like the detail you used it really makes me believe I’m in a sand storm in the desert.

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Love

I really like the beginning it drew me into the book and the title is very unique great detail and I will definitely recommend it to anyone.

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Very good plot so far

Good job I like the title especially it pulls me in and I would defiantly keep reading

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