Shinku Kurenai & G C Fer

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Amazing Characters!

G C Fer here, doing my review of Towards the Dawn

So the story itself is detailed and the blurb had caught my interest. From the two siblings, to Elizabeth, and the events surrounding them. I'm all in on this. The title, itself, looks very positive. I am a sucker of anything related to fantasy. I am an imaginative person and I can picture how the way the story flows through the interactions of the characters and their progressive development that would nurture them into the character that they would have to become. Since this work is ongoing, I am yet to give my full review.

So... all of us are struggling with punctuations and stuff, right? Trust me, we are all good in English but to be honest, we tend to ignore grammatical and punctuation errors, right? It may affect the informality of our story. However, I started learning about this two errors... so I used an app to check it for me. I may suggest the same, there were a few errors but they weren't as relevant as the story, which is totally amazing, in my opinion.

Overall, man, I'm waiting for your next updates. Good job!

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Beginning Review

Hi, my name is G C Fer, here to review your work.

To be honest, I skimmed through the chapters to get the vibe of the story. Character-wise, there's this distinctive characteristic in a story that makes a character unique, something that defines it and brings it to life. You brought your characters to life beautifully and I can feel the interactions between the characters but it was a bit limited.

Story-wise, I think that the narrative is moving towards the mystery elements of the story. Magic is executed and explained thoroughly. Surprise elements are there, Color, I love color-coding, I want to find out what happens next.

Writing Style... err. The Story is directly going towards narrative and there were few dialogues (I'm just an amateur writer so, I can't say that I'm right, alright?) For me, I think I want more dialogue between the characters so that I can visualize and flesh them out further.

Technical writing. There were some minor things... but mind you, you're good. I use Grammarly but not entirely because you don't want it to dictate how you really write. I think punctuations are important if I'm going to the technicalities. I'm not perfect, myself, that's why I double-check my punctuations with the app.

Overall, I want to continue reading your work. Great Job!

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Vampyre/Witch or Witch/Vampyre

Hello my friend, this is G C Fer doing the review for your second installment.

First, the story. Good plot, nice twists and turns, and unexpectedness.
Second, the characters. Interactions were proficiently done, the characters' relevance to the overall story was solid, I like the play between the v/w and w/v to differentiate one from the other... but it kind of still makes me feel like you should call the other as something else... like think of a term aside from v/w and w/v and make it your own. However, your decision and style is always respected.
Third, my personal take. The first story was good, but this one is better... probably your third would be your best? I don't know but I have read the third to find out. Speaking of reading the third installment, I'll have to wait for it to be finished before I could give my honest review about it.
Overall, it was worth the read for me! Good job!

As always, it's been a pleasure~

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Spell me Series 1 Review

G C Fer Here!

So, right of the bat, after reading the entire book for about three days.
> I see a similarity with our style of writing, WHICH is GOOD! I mean it.
> Dialogue is good (my opinion not yours whoever you are reading my review of her work)
> Descriptions are average for me, but it doesn't matter because fantasy is meant to evoke imagination (so reader of this book if you are highly unimaginative then my apologies)
> Character interactions are there, some dialogues caught my attention. I like it when someone commented how genius a character was...
> If there is something... I wish to have a lasting impression on the characters...
>Overall, I can't wait to read the next book.

As always, it's been a pleasure.

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