Very Interesting story
I really enjoyed the story so far, it was quite unique. I loved the ending of the first chapter. II did have a few issues though. The main character in the first chapter just seemed annoyed with everything for a while. I can't imagine a real person thinking about how annoyed they are at children for improper grammar, I would expect children to make those mistakes. What I'm trying to get at is that by her constant annoyance in the very beginning of the book, before we as readers understand her, can cause her to be an unlikable character to some. Maybe its just me as I have been critiquing for a while.
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I'm excited to keep reading! I hope my review was not too harsh, as I did really like the chapter.