Kahna Kahn

Honolulu

www.kahnakahn.com

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Boring

Though others said it was good there was no real plot...no motive no story line...it was just like an everyday thing that ppl can find in their lives...I myself write as well n in my opinion I think writing about a person just drinking or getting coffee is normal who’d want to read that...there was no real depth to the characters...their personalities are weak sorry to say I by pass half the book waiting for a real climax didn’t get it

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Slow

I don’t verify much read slow pace but the writing was good...honestly I skipped most chapters

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