Hikari_Unmei

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Good but...

This is a good book and I like how its done! However there is a lot and I mean A LOT of grammar and spelling errors...perhaps find an editor to help you? But I would definitely recommend this to a friend even with the errors!

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Oh my god! Just yes!

Like please read this and keep an open mind! You won't regret a thing!

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Very fascinating!

I really enjoy reading this story! I love the unexpected plot twists and the wild characters!!

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Addictive

I only meant to check the first few chapters out and now I cant put this book down!!

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Well done except for a few minor issues

This story has potential to be an officially published story but it definitely needs to work on slowing down and producing a less rushed pace and smoother details. Other wise 9/10 stars!

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Totally Unexpected

I really liked how the author builds suspense and takes sudden plot twists. Heavily recommended 9/10

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Cliche

Over all.its pretty cliche and I'm not pleased with how the story ended. It felt too random and abrupt. 3/10 stars.

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My favorite book!!!

10/10 Stars! Out of all the books I've read so far this is my absolute favorite!!

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Not bad...

9/10 Stars.

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Very short and cute story

It wasn't at all what I expected but I liked it. 8/10 stars.

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Heavily recommended!

9/10 stars!

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Well done!!

8/10 stars!

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Too rushed and too many unanswered questions

I give this an 8/10 stars! I love the book but I feel that the last chapters are entirely too rushed and thrown together. I also feel that the mating happened poorly and who was the weird girl at the ball but otherwise it's a good book.

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Basically Rape

The author has a great writing style but I'm having issues getting over the fact that he is manipulative and basically raping her.

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Excellent

This book is an excellent read and 100% worth the time and effort!! (side note: Have a box of tissues near by because there are quite a few scenes where you'll need them)

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Grammar Grammar Grammar

There are problems with grammar, spelling and punctuation from the very first sentence all the way to the end.

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Not bad...

The overall story is good but between the back.and forth conflict and the abrupt end I can say that sadly this is not one of my favorite stories...

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10/10 Stars

Despite a few things here and there I love this book and if it is ever officially published I would buy it in a heartbeat!
Edit: I love this book 100% I heavily recommend this book!

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Absolutely amazing

Its definitely a dark tale but I absolutely love this!!

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Too many grammer problems...

I like the story and Iike where it is going but there are so many grammar errors and problems it makes it a little difficult to read sometimes...

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Very very dark...

This story is amazing but very dark and very intense!! I love the story however there are quite a few errors. The ending is the best thing I hope we get more details on Ferns ending!!

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9/10

9/10 stars

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Amazing!!!!

10/10 would recommend to any of my friends!!

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Not bad!

Great way to spend time

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Tears

This book makes me think the author has encountered similar grief as the book describes the agony of losing a loved one to a T. I cried for literally every chapter in this book it hit so close to home.

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Well Done

As the tittle of this review states this book is well done! My only complaint is that there are quite a few spots with typos!

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Not Bad.....

The story its self isn't bad in fact it's actually pretty good. However there's somethings that aren't really explained and there are a LOT of grammar and spelling errors...

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This book is a great read!

This book is one big amazing plot twist! I highly recommend it!

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Very dark but well done!

Not for easily disturbed people but I love the story. It needs a few edits and corrections but if you can overlook those then 10/10 very well done!

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10/10 would recommend

This story is very original and I love that I have never seen this concept before! In my personal opinion this book is one of a kind and needs to be given more recognition.

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Not for the sensitive or easily disturbed

I love this book! Its not one you'd share with just anyone, however, if you're strong willed and not easily disturbed this is one I would definitely recommend.

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This book is simply amazing!

No extra words needed! Read this book and be drawn into a world unlike any other!

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Probably the best book Ive read in while!

Book one is amazing I can only hope the rest of the series is as amazing as this book! This has set the bar high for the books to follow!

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Well done!

Everything about this book is amazing. I hope to see this book offically published someday.

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Rushed

I have to given an honest lower end review because the author created a very rushed unsatisfactory ending that felt...fake and just unpleasant. With that being said it was good up until the end chapters where the rushing began.

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