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Intriguing fantasy

The author takes takes you into a world of faeries, demons and sex which is a dark and intriguing mix. The characters are well created and the story is written with depth and thought.

It would be much easier to read if there were more paragraphs and there are a few punctuation errors, if this was fixed then the story would be perfect.

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Lovely short story

A beautiful story of the love between a man and woman. Very gentle and romantic. Great read :-)

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A great description of a teenage heartbreak

This story took me back to my younger years, I think many of us girls have met someone who broke our hearts where we felt used or abandoned. That just says how well the story was written. The author weaves a gripping tale which is definitely worth a read!

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