It is a very interesting take and an easy read. Too many times this specific genre is flooded with detail filled mega books, that reduce the story to a bunch of worlds mushed together, rather than building it up into a great story.
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I was interested in the city itself and how the environment functioned so feel there could have perhaps been a bit more detail around that, maybr slightly less about the human struggles within it. The characters are detailed enough to form a full picture, but the nature of the world they are forced to live in lacks construct. All in all a great easy read and can't wait for the end.
A few missing words, grammatical faults and punctuation errors ... but nothing I haven't seen in mainstream published books before. And nothing that a second read over won't fix.
Good show! Keep on going!