Elvia Dobbs

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As I was reading the story, I noticed some spelling errors but, I've read your other stories and this was just a simple typo mistake so, other than that the story seems to be coming along quite nicely. And its not as complicated as most dystopian books ive read and had to procecced to go back some pages to understand whats going on. So overall good job.

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