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AMAZING.

The plot is so unique and beautiful that I was at a loss of words. The writing is amazing. The character's development is great. It's like roasted marshmallow with dark chocolate.

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BEYOND ANY COMPLIMENT

The reviw is in the review title, what else should I say....I'm not good with words anyway.

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Amazing

It was amazing. The plot was nice and smooth. It explained everything through flashbacks which I really loved. I love how Manik's character always stuck to his strong hard arrogant image, but then as things got clearer how he melted - literally. The ending got me crying it was really touching and sad. The grammar wasn't perfect, it could be polished. But I like the language and structural techniques the suthor used. Also Soha's character wasn't really clear - was she bad or good? Maybe a little bit more detail on her character would've been better. Overall, it was a great story.

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Great

Can't wait for thr next update. This was really amazing.

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