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California

Hi I'm Dalila, I'm an author on wattpad and I mainly write erotica romance, fiction, horror, and supernatural. And I am now writing here. Enjoy my lesbian and werewolf story!

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Steamy and Sexy

Hot and dirty fun stories that any adult can enjoy 😉

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Too cliche

This story is okay for something that could have possibly be a first time writing. I think you need to work on finding a unique writing style. There are grammar mistakes that are very noticeable. The story overall is very cliche and simply basic. From the first chapter, I wasn’t hooked in. It was typical, I think this story could have been written more adults than teenagers. And I also suggest using Grammarly to fix mistakes. Otherwise, this book could be a better potential with a different outlook of characters and description wise.

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