Criss

Wonderland

I'm honestly just a huge nerd who loves to read and has a pretty big obsession with Harry Potter, TWD, and Alice in Wonderland.

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Great story line

You have a great story line and your updates come out really fast which is really nice. Towards the beginning of the story there are lots of grammar and spelling mistakes that did not make sense and we're hard to push through but your recent chapters only have minor mistakes that are easily read through. I love the character development and how much detail you put in. Overall your story is amazing.
(Rewrote my review since my view on certain things have changed and my wording on my last one was bad.)

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Cute

It's a really good story but I feel like it moves a little too fast. But other than that it's a great read!

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I am in love 😍

A few spelling and grammar mistakes that are easily fixable and one of your chapters is blank which needs to be fixed but other than that I absolutely love this story.

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Love it 😍

It's so fluffy and cute and I just love it 💜. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes but they're easily fixable. Love the story though 💜

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I love your story

There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that it's really good

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Amazing!

So the story was kinda predictable but it was a really good read. There are a few spelling mistakes but they are easily fixable.

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Good story but...

There is a TON of spelling and grammar mistakes. I almost stopped reading because of all the spelling and grammar mistakes. The story was cliche but that's okay sometimes you want to read a cliche story. I feel like the story became more dull towards the end. Like after he fell into a coma. Still it is a good read if you're bored but I would definitely go back and edit.

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Great!

There are some spelling and grammar mistakes but those are easily fixable. Other than that it's a cliche love story and I really like it. Nickels is my favorite by far.

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A good read but....

I got so bored with all the flashbacks. Half of them don't seem necessary and are honestly quite boring to read. I cannot finish the book for I am so bored with it because right now in the story it feels like flashback, after flashback, after flashback and the flashbacks aren't even needed.

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Great read so far 💗

A few times when you went to put thought you put though. It's a great read over all.

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AMAZING 😍

There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes but other than that I LOVE your story! I would definitely recommend it to my friends 🙂.

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Definitely recommend

The story is written really well but I have read a couple stories similiar to this before but it is still pretty good.

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