TheWeirdestBlerb

City of Nothingness

Hey! Call me "Blerb", if you'd like. Yeah yeah, it's a weird name. BUT---- I LOVE to draw, and I also LOVE writing! If you don't mind, feedback would be appreciated! Thank you, and have a nice day!

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This was pretty interesting to me, just one *little* thing I'd like to say, is to check your chapters for any mistakes before you submit it. But other than that, it's pretty good.

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