M. S.

Croatia

Writer of fantasy-romance novels and action thrillers.

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I really enjoyed the story. It was a wonderful experience and a wonderful tale with characters that gave a whole new dimension to the tale. A story at the beginning was confusing but accustomed to your writing style. In my opinion, you could unite the chapters to make them smaller and the story would run smoothly. Keep writing because I see that you are doing very well.

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An interesting story may I say. It has a really catchy plot and amazing writing style. In the near future, I am intrigued how the development of relationships between main characters will end up. Keep writing!

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The story is pretty confusing at the start, but I hope it will become clearer in time. The idea is interesting and I'm really interested in what's going to happen next. The protagonist lives in a strange world where there is no reason to smile and that is an excellent idea for the plot. In addition to the small grammatical errors, all in all, the book has an intriguing plot and unique writing style.

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It so unique! I love it so much! Keep writing and I hope you'll soon win a publishing deal.

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The story has an interesting start, and then the plot was moving too fast. Although I like dynamic actions, a lot has happened in the first five chapters. I'm not saying the book is bad, but the idea is perfect, it just needs to be more elaborate. I couldn't understand Shelly because she forgot Adriana so quickly and immediately became Cornelius' queen. Don't let this discourage you because you have a really good idea for the story. Keep writing and elaborate the topic a bit more.

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Charming...

This story was very charming although I would prefer a bit more dynamic action in the book. Sometimes chapters dragged about an uninteresting subject but overall it was really interesting and intriguing story to read. The plot was okay and the characters are very likable and seem really realistic which is a good thing. Keep on writing because your writing style is amazing and in a near future, I hope this book will get published. Don't give up.

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