H Palmer

Auckland, New Zealand

14 and have been writing since about age 4. Give my novel a read!

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Interesting Story

This is obviously a very heartfelt and touching story. The writing flowed easily but I think there could have been more dialogue to lengthen the experiences as it is very fast paced and seems to be more a recounting than a novel. I see this is a work in progress so I look forward to it's completion.

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Love the story!

I found this book to have a very hooking plot with unexpected twists around every corner! The plot is very well thought out and the characters have real personality. I did find that for me there was a little too much description, but while there was a lot it was very well conveyed and written. I did find a few errors in the grammar and some ambiguous uses of words but overall a very good story and I’d love to see more in this line of work!

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