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Great start!

It's really good, the blurb is amazing, it really pulls people in. I also liked the future technology of hologram messages and a car that knows it's being chased by the cops. There are some grammar errors here and there that can be corrected though. Other than that, good job! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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