Blue_Lake

Gilberts, Illinois

I'm 13 years old, I watch YouTube of course. My fav YouTuber is Markiplier, or my 2nd husband. His alter ego Darkiplier, or Darky is my 1st husband. So I probably will write lots of fanfics about him!

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*inhales sharply*

ok, so first off, I just wanted to say, this story was better than I had expected it to be. I mean like, in the beginning when the first few chapters were up, I didn't want to keep reading it because I thought it was boring and mostly because of the spelling errors and grammar, but then, once Juliette had run into the Alpha King, and they started growing feelings toward each other, it just got SUPER suspenseful, and I like that about a story. Now, when Delani was killed, I figured Ace did kill her, which I found hadn't. As the stry progressed, I found that I couldn't stop reading. The last few chapters when Juliette started to contemplate whether or not she killed Delani while her sleep walking was in effect, made me really think. And I put myself into her shoes, thinking about what I could have done, since she was using the knife as her weapon of choice in her class with the Alpha. But, I digress, anyhow, this story is one of my favorites, more than I thought it would be. Keep it up! I can't wait to read Skinwalkers!

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THERE ARE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!! This story was amazing! I now know who the girl was with the purple eyes was in the first book! This story was amazing, beautiful, stunning, everything good! The plot was awesome, it kept me on edge, it kept me excited, it was suspenseful! I don't know if I can say a bad word about this! The writing style is really cool, showing parts from the specific year, or present, and then showing Eve's past, it was really cool! While the punctuation did get me a couple times, I had no problem with the story, but overall, this story was MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now why can't every story be like this, why can't every story be so, so, I can't find a great word to describe this.... This is unbelievable, I need to start my stories over, make them just like this one, make them just as intense, keep it just as wondrous, how am I supposed to do that, I can't imagine a way to do that! You should really make a short little book about what goes through your head when you think of a story! That would help me like nothing else has! I might need to re-read this in a few days, I just cannot stop thinking about all of these amazing characters, worlds, supernaturals, EVERYTHING!!!!!!!! You know for a fact I'm gonna recommend it to my friends who are on here. I think, that this is the best story I have ever read, by far! I honestly hope you continue making books for this series! Maybe in the next possible book, describe what was going through Snow's mind while with Barron, in the past like this book, then go back to her life then, to show what she discovers in her world. I won't be able to ever love a book as much as this one now...

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well, this story wasn't my favorite, while there is suspense that i hope gets resolved, the main reason i don't like it is because of the grammar. For example, when you want to use the word, 'I'm', you end up using the word 'am', which in my book, is not correct. The plot is very well thought out, while there are some confusing parts in the story, I found that it is very detailed, but at times, you seemed to skip ahead in a lot of parts that you could've elaborated on. Now, ok, there are some very heated scenes in this, mainly the last ones[Chapters]. For many, this is basically porn, but it's not. For me, and probably lots of others, this is perfectly fine, it's not like there's pics or anything dirty like that. Anyway, this story in general is ok, I would recommend it to some of my friends but only some. I don't know if you're 10 and you randomly know all the parts on the body but this is very odd, you skip a lot, seem to get into the heated scenes way too much, and make this story go different ways very quickly. But otherwise, continue making stories like this.

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omgoodnesss....

There's so much to say about this story, but first, I would like to say, I hope you make a sequel, or possibly a prequel to this story. So the plot, the plot was pretty cool, Bliss had a tough past, then solved it after getting her voice back in the process, but after she started talking, I kinda got confused because of the White Wolf thing. I caught on, but it made me really brain dead. But you put a lot of work in it, I'm glad you wrote this story. Anyway, the characters, the characters were very complex, Bliss and her siblings seem very determined in the face of danger, even though they couldn't do anything about it. It's like Twilight, except it doesn't have Bella, Jacob, and Edward. Or Rasputin. But I found that Xavier was only mentioned in the very first chapters, like 3-18. Otherwise, it was just Bliss going through her life with her family. Next, the writing style, ok, I know that maybe you didn't read it over and see the errors, i have some complaints. When I say this, I don't mean it harshly, just a little suggestion for a story you plan on writing. So, there were multiple times that when you were going through the steps of what Bliss went through, you would use 'Than' not 'Then', and a lot of times, you would randomly capitalize words that did not need to be capitalized. Unless those were code words for something, I wasn't paying attention. Anyway, the story in general. So this story made me really inspired, one of my friends was mute, but not for the same reasons, something traumatic happened to her and she just stopped talking, but I finally convinced her to talk, I digress, but this story was really well made until this war happened, well, once Bliss and Jackson had that phone call. But anyways, this story was really good, a few mistakes here and there, but I loved it nonetheless. Keep up the great work!

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wow, just wow...

Ok, so this story is quite the adventure, i wasn't expecting it to turn out that way, at the end, I expected the three of them to be happy, not Rayvin walking out of their house. But I loved the character, Rayvin is very determined, while many would call her a slut/whore like her mom did, she was just enjoying her life the way she wanted to. Drake is very complex I believe, he has a special bond with his sister that a lot of siblings and twins don't have. Victor is very playful in my mind because he always teases Rayvin. On the other hand, Sebastian is very charming, he seems like a gentleman in the story and treats Rayvin well. Of course, while the plot was amazing, it was kind of confusing sometimes, but even if the story held some errors concerning grammar, it was a good story, I almost got a headache not being able to read more. Great job! Keep it up!

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OMG!!!!!!!

I'm in love with this story, I'm so glad I added this to my list of currently reading. The plot is so well thought out, the characters are very dynamic. The writing style is amazing, yes, there were some grammar and punctuation errors in this but it didn't distract me too much from the story. If I had to say something about this story to a friend, I would say, "If you don't read this, I'll slap you! You don't even know!" I'm sure everyone would say this, if not, then everyone doesn't know a good book when they read it. Great job! Can you make a sequel or something like that?

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