Andrew Van Dyk

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Great Work :)

I really like your rhyming couplets and the images you paint with your writing style. It's simple yet complex, and simplicity can go a long way, especially with poetry like this.
I think the messages in the poems are weaved into it in a clever way. Keep up the great work!

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