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Sweet Little Story

This was such a nice read, got through it in a day. The plot flowed along nicely, it was very nice to see a story like this without rogue attacks being a central point, and the focus being entirely on their relationship. I really liked Eliya as a character, and Aiden faffing about trying to explain stuff to her was entertaining. I would only say go over it again to edit the grammar. There weren't a lot of errors, just a couple here and there. Overall quite enjoyed it :)

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New take on the cliche

I originally found this story on Wattpad, and I'm so happy to see it here too. It's such a nice new take on the alpha-omega / mate tropes. I love it, and hope for more soon!

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Love the Concept

I loved the concept of 'demon dusted' itself, and it set up a very interesting and intense story. I loved the tension between Dean and Myth, and the action propelled the story straight through. I would only say I wanted more 'breathers,' so to speak in the beginning, because once it got started it didn't seem to stop. That's great and exciting, but I want something that pulls me out of the action and gives me more of a reason to root for these characters, other than the feeling of impending danger. A humanizing moment for Dean, or Myth, but ideally both, so as the reader I'm fully invested in their safety and wellbeing. There are a few grammatical issues, but nothing another once over won't fix. All in all, very well done!

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Curious to see where it goes

I think there's a good story in the works here, right now my main complaint would be the cliche arguments between Alex and Irene, and the sentences/ideas that are repeated over and over in the course of those arguments ('you never loved me, you only cared about yourself' / 'you're making me do this, you owe me, I'll be the villan,' etc.) these points can be stated but not as often as they are. during a physical confrontation like the one shown, I'm not sure how realistic it is that both parties would be as charismatic as they are. but overall, excited to see how Reese and Irene meet, and how Irene escapes. Will keep on my reading list to see where it goes :)

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Sometimes romance isn't pretty

And Kayresia A Bass does a great job of portraying that. The inconsistencies in characters that are so relatable and darker nuances to the book made it a very enjoyable read. I would only say I wasn't the biggest fan of how Kay was introduced - his seeming apathy about any woman that suddenly turned into oh wait no I've loved her for a while. It made sense as the story went on but how we were introduced to his love of her just confused me a bit. Apart from that, I loved the writing style and the characters, especially Celine.

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