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A Magical Family Christmas!

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Romance


Jeffrey and his family spend Christmas in New York City.

Chapter 1

During a trip to New York City at Christmastime, Jeffrey and his family saw a sparkling Christmas tree at Rockefeller Center! Other Christmas trees also surrounded the family! The lights on these trees also looked like points of light from the heavens! The family got a chance to see trees of Rockefeller Center up-close! To them, it looked like a mountain that reached to the sky!

When Jeffrey and his wife Lilly Louise saw the skaters floating on the ice, they started to feel young again. They also started to notice young skaters on the ice who were holding hands. For Lilly Louise and Jeffrey, this brought back memories of when they started dating and holding hands. The two of them started both holding hands and sharing kisses again, which brought smiles to the faces of their kids Baxter and Sandy Sue.

Unexpectedly, a group of singers caught the family’s attention. They sang a song about Baby Jesus. For both Jeffrey and Lilly Louise, this brought back a memory of when they decorated their first Christmas tree together. They shared yet another kiss on the lips, which brought more smiles to faces of their kids.

The family saw more beautiful Christmas trees! These trees had silver baubles! These baubles looked like magical bubbles! The beautiful angels of Rockefeller Center were playing Christmas carols on their trumpets, which really put this family in the holiday spirit! This was a magical time for everybody!

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