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Sexy Greek God Kidnappers

By AustinKalin All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Romance


Being cheated on is the worst feeling ever. When I called my best friend Kyrn and told her what happened between me and Brett, she came over straight away. I always told her that I wished I would find a man that would love me and not just want sex all the time like most guys do. It turns out, that I would be getting my wish tonight. Tonight was the night that my best friend and I were kidnapped from my house by sexy Greek god kidnappers.

Chapter 1: Mine?


“Time out!” The umpire yelled. I got up and ran over to my best friend Kyrn who was at the pitchers mound.

“Okay Kyrn. You got this. The count is 3-2 and there are 2 outs with a runner on 3rd. All we need is one more strike and we win the championships!” I said trying to encourage her.

She nodded her head. “Thanks.”

I smiled at her brightly. “Anytime.”

I ran back over to the plate and crouched down waiting for her pitch. I looked over at my couch and he gave me the sign for an inside ball.

I repeated the sign for Kyrn and she nodded. She pitched it and the batter ticked it causing it too shoot straight up. I threw my catchers helmet off and ran over to where Kyrn was.

“Mine!” Kyrn yelled. The first basemen and I went to her sides just in case she missed it.

She caught it and everyone cheered. “We won!” I yelled at the top of my lungs.

“Northwestern High wins the championship! Northwestern High wild cats are your new 2013 softball champions!” The announcer shouted excitedly.

The team ran out in the middle of the diamond and jumped on one another screaming and shouting.

“Captains, would you like to do the honors?” One of our teammates said handing us the Gatorade jug. Kyrn and I looked at each other and smiled.

“Yes please.” I said taking the jug.

Kyrn and I walked up to the coach and dumped it on him. We bursted out laughing while our coach joined in.

“I’m really gonna miss you two girls.” He said to us.

“Don’t worry. I’m so coming back next season and helping you coach.” I said with a big smile.

“Me too. Duh!” Kyrn said.

“Good.” Our coach said pulling us into hugs.

“Sam. Dad and I are leaving now for Italy. Okay?” My mom said as she walked over to us.

“Same here Kyrn. Now remember we left out debit card at Sam’s house along with your clothes. We will be back in 2 months. Behave your two.” Kyrn’s mom said smiling.

“We will mother.” Kyrn said with a smile.

Kyrn’s parents and my parents are leaving for Italy for 2 months. So that means Kyrn and I get to have my house for 2 months by ourselves. I know a lot of you are wondering that is kinda stupid to leave two 18 year old girls alone for 2 months, but my parents think it will teach us responsibility since we will be in college next year. So she wants us to see what it is like living by ourselves. Kryn and I haven’t decided if we wanted to buy an apartment, or still live at home when we go to college. But my parents said by doing this, it will help us choose.

“Bye mom, bye dad. Love you guys.” I said giving them both hugs and kisses.

“Remember to call us everyday, or whenever you get the chance.” My mom said before getting in the car.

Kyrn and I waved until our parents were gone before we started screaming. “I think a shopping trip is in need sometime this week. I mean like seriously, we both have debit cards now.” I said.

“I know. But you better hurry and go take a shower if you want to surprise Brett for your guys’ 2 year anniversary.” She said smiling.

“Oh shit. I’m gonna be late!” We both ran my my car and jumped in.

“What did you get him?” She asked me.

“He loves getting his picture taken with me, so I got him a picture frame with his favorite picture of us in it, and tickets to see the Green Bay packers, and they are taped to the picture frame. I don’t know why he likes the packers. I’m more of a Vikings fan.” I said teasingly.

“You and football.” She said shaking her head at me.

“What? You like the Steelers.” I retorted.

“This is true.” She laughed in defeat.

We finally made it too her house and I dropped her off and drove back to my house.

After getting ready which didn’t take very long, I hopped back in my car.

I arrived at Brett’s house in 10 minutes and saw that his parents weren’t home so I just walked in like I always do.

Is he home? Well his car is here.

I heard some noise upstairs so I quickly go up the stairs with his present in my hands.

His bedroom door is slightly open so I walk in.

“Hey Brett, I got-oh my gosh.” I said as the last part came out in a whisper.

When I walked in, I notice a very naked Brett, on top of a very naked Tasha, and they were….uh getting it on.

“I love you Tasha.” He says leaning down and kissing her. I cleared my throat and he quickly looks up and when his eyes land on me with my arms crossed they widen. “Oh my gosh. Sam baby, when did you get here?” He asked quickly and gets off of Tasha.

“Hey Sam, I was just uh-” Tasha started but I cut her off.

“Shut up.” I said as she quickly looks down and wraps the sheets around herself tighter.

I look at the picture and grab the tickets off of the picture frame before I throw it on the ground.

The glass shatters and Tasha gasps.

“Happy 2 year anniversary boyfriend.” He looks at me with so much regret and a tear slips out. I hold both football tickets out in front and rip them in his face. His eyes widen. “Go to hell.” I say before I run out of there.

I hear his footsteps following me and I rush out to my car and lock it with him banging on my windows.

I turn my car on and put it in reverse, then speeding away to my house.

I grab my phone and dial Kyrn’s number.

“Hello?” She asks.

“Kyrn.” I sob.

“Oh sweetie, what happened?”

“He’s a lying, sex-craved manwhore!” I yell.

“Okay. I’m on my way, need anything?”

“Movies and icecream please.” I cry harder. I was starting to get pissed because right as I made it to the stop light, it turns red.

“Okay hun, I’ll be right over.”

“Okay thankyou. Bye.”

“Anytime. Bye.” She says and we hang up.

I put my phone down and look up noticing a giant, red F350 truck pull up next to me. But what really got me was the 4 guys inside of it. They were all extremely attractive. Then there’s me, red puffy eyes and tears running down my face.

But the guy that really stuck out was the one driving. He had black spiked hair and grey eyes. He was in the middle of talking when he looked at me.

He stopped talking and stared at me. Everything seemed to stop when this really sexy man was staring at me.

His friends tried to get his attention, but all he could do was smile. He looked like he had just won the lottery, but all of the sudden he got angry. Probably thinking like I was some creep that was staring at him. His eyes turned dark, and they almost looked…

The light quickly changed and I wanted to get out of there.

After getting the hell out of there and arriving at my house, I changed into my pjs and waited for Kyrn to show up.

But it didn’t take long as I heard someone knocking on my door.

“Hey.” Kyrn said as I let her in. She was wearing an oversized sweatshirt, baggy sweatpants, and had her hair in a messy bun.

So she pretty much looked like me.

She handed me my tub of mint chocolate chip icecream and put in the Last Song.

We started talking about what happened and I told her everything. Then it got a lot more emotional because it remained her of her last boyfriend Trey. He did the same thing, and it was also with Tasha. She was Northwestern High’s slut.

So here we are, crying our eyes out, eating tubs and tubs of icecream, and watching sad romantic movies. Probably not a good choice, but we don’t care.

We are at the part where her dad dies when a knock on the door interrupted us.

I groaned in frustration and got up while wiping away all of my tears.

I open the door and started yelling at the people.

“Listen. My friend and I are not in the mood, so if you could please leave that would be nice.” I said without looking at them.

“Mine.” I hear someone growl softly. And yes I did say growl.

“What?” I turn around and my eyes went huge.

It was the same group of guys that saw me crying in my car at the stoplight. I take this time to look at him. He has a white, tight fitting shirt so you could see his muscles, dark blue faded jeans that were scrunched at the bottom because of his combat boots.

His other friends are tall just like him. The one on the left has short brown hair and blue eyes, the one of the right has shaggy dirty blonde hair and green eyes, and the other one next to him has shaggy brown hair and brown eyes.

I was pulled out of my thoughts when black haired guy pulls me into his chest.

He puts his face in the crook of my neck and breathed deeply.

“Okay. This is a little too weird for me. So if you could let me go, that would be great.” I said pushing him away.

He growls again and pulls me closer to him. “Mine.”

I look up and noticed short brown haired guy smiling like crazy.

Uh this isn’t weird at all.

“What is taking you so long Sam?” Kyrn asks walking out here.

“Mine.” I hear brown haired guy say. And with that he pulls Kyrn into his chest also.

“Congrats dude.” Everyone said too him.

“You too.” He said to black haired guy.

Kyrn and I look at each other weirdly.

“Can you please let us go?” She asks.

Both guys look at us and growl softly.

“No.” They say in unison.

“Fine. Shall we?” I ask Kyrn.

She smirks evilly at me. “We shall.”

We bring our knees up and knee them both where the sun don’t shine.

When they fall, Kyrn and I quickly run in the house and lock the door.

About three seconds later there is banging.

“Leave us alone you bastards!” Kyrn yells.

“Seriously. Go away.” I yell at them.

The banging doesn’t stop and only gets louder.

“Back door?” I asked her. We decided to run out the back door and slip into the shadows. Thank God it’s dark outside.

“What the hell do they want?!” Kyrn screams/whispers.

“How should I know?” I whisper back.

Like they heard us, both of them turn towards us.

“Shit!” We scream and run.

About five seconds later, I hear a yelp.

I look to my right and see Kyrn get picked up by the short brown haired guy.

“Let her go!” I scream and run toward him.

But before I could even take a step, I’m picked up by black haired guy.

“Kyrn!” I scream.

“Sam!” She screams back.

Our eyes widen and realization hits us. We both understand now that we are being kidnapped by Sexy Greek God kidnappers.

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