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“Alex. Are you coming? It’s your first day of school.” My mom called me.
“Yes mom. I’m coming!” I ran down the stairs only to find my idiotic brother Asher eating all of my bacon. “Hey!” I yelled at him. He smirked before he took the last one and ran off into the living room.
I ran after him and almost ran over my uncle. “Sorry uncle Carter.” I said in a rush before running after Asher.
“I see Alex is getting her alpha werewolf speed under control.” Uncle Carter said.
“Yes. She just shifted last week.” My mom replied with a bright smile.
“How’s Skylar and Axel?” Uncle Spencer said walking in.
“Good.” They both replied smiling.
“Now, where is my niece?”
“Uncle Spencer!” I yelled running over to him.
“How do you like being 16?” He asked me.
“Okay. I don’t feel any different, well besides the fact that I shifted last week.”
“Pft. Being 18 is better.” Asher said in a matter-of-factly tone.
“Whatever.” I said laughing shoving his shoulder gently.
“Come on. I’ll give you a ride to school sis.” He said nicely.
“Sweet. Thanks Asher.” I said and I went to go grab my bookbag.
“Now remember Asher. If any boy even looks at her, kick his ass.” Our dad said.
“Yes dad.” Asher replied back. “And trust me I know. I don’t want any guy staring at my little sis.”
“You are only 2 years older than me.” I laughed.
“I don’t care. You are younger than me, therefor I have to protect you.” He said puffing out his chest.
“Lets just go.” I laughed at him.
Today was the day. My first day of school….joy to the world. Note the sarcasm.
Samantha Speed: There were several punctuation, grammar, and missing word problems but it did not detract from the story. This story was very well done, enjoyable, and had an interesting enough plot. It took a while to finish. This story is not complete. I love it, but I want to see another book or have more cha...
Flik: Hi! ^.^ huge fan of yours on ff.net! When I saw the note about this contest on The Way We Smile, I couldn't help but rush over here, create an account, and vote! XD Seriously love this story and would recommend it to anyone! :D best FT fanfiction out there. Amazing story, amazing concept that wa...
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...
Shreya Biswas: Finally god...... I was tired of Charissa doubting Frederick's love... yes.. All's well that ends well.... i was getting really downright agitated at the author because the suspense was held really well on how things will work out in the epilogue and i just wanted them to have a happy ending.. An...
maewilde25: I am so in love with this story!!! captivated me till the very end, there wasn't a dull moment. Didn't particularly enjoy the lay out and some bits of info was missing along with how a 21 year old man amassed so much wealth that needed to be explained other than that and a few spelling errors, th...
Alani Foreigner: I absolutely loved how you created this story. It isn't like the other cliché stories I've ever read. I had just started reading it yesterday and just had to finish it. The main characters are grotesquely awesome and I fell in love with them. If you're into fantasy and stuff I can guarantee that ...
Ruby0h: Overall I thought your story was really good! It drew me in right away and kept me interested as the story progressed. I loved the character of Kayla being inserted into this story, and the way she affected and shaped the life of the original story into something totally new and interesting. I lo...
Hudson: Your story was fantastic Erin! The Rising Sun was one of the first stories I read on Inkitt, and I have to say I don't regret the three to four days I spent pouring through the story.Probably the biggest strength I see in your writing is your characterisation of Eliana, Oriens, and the rest of th...