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Little Fluttering Hearts

By preety_lady_serenity All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Poetry

Chapter 1

I am the woman that has 15 children.
Little fluttering hearts
That I juggle every day;
Each with its own sensitivity
Trembling in my palms.

There's pride in my eyes
When I see each fluttering heart.
Glimmers of uniqueness
Challenge to my core.
And when they learn
It's my sweetest victory;
My purpose in this world.

When as big thumping hearts
They will leave me
One day,
To take on life
To battle decay;
I will look back
When they were fluttering hearts
And smile and wave while a memory
I become.

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John E. WordSlinger: I like this story a lot, I admire the mix of modernistic things in the story. Brilliantly written from beginning to the end. thank you... John

eggs3447: Good luck winning the contest! I liked the writing and ideas. I hope you enjoyed writing it.-RoseSpecktor

William Elliott Kern: Hi Jan, sorry it took so long...but good up to chapter 10. The story is a good Jan, but suggest that you try reading your Story or Stories out loud, this will help you edit your work, check your grammar and punctuation, and tell you if you are on the right track for your story and plot.....

Laraine Smith: This reminded me of a Hallmark Channel Christmas movie called "Help For The Holidays!" I love the little boy's innocence and love for the Christmas holiday! :)

beaded_elephant: I love this story, I love how intricate and in-depth the characters and their relationships with each other are. The plot of this story is really good, you won't want to stop reading.

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