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For The Holidays

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Poetry


What can you see "for the holidays?"

Chapter 1

For the holidays,

Stairways are lit up with stars.

They’re from the heavens.

All the Christmas trees,

They have blue flowers on them.

They glow in the dark.

Hearts and points of light,

They are floating in the sky.

What a miracle.

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Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!

Sara Huppman: My only pet peeve was that there were spelling errors. In one of the last chapters there was a mistake it said Melanie handed the hanky back to Chrystal. It was supposed to be Jess. Great book great plot. Didn't need some of the references to modern day culture like the line about frozen. If ther...

John E. WordSlinger: I like this story a lot, I admire the mix of modernistic things in the story. Brilliantly written from beginning to the end. thank you... John

William Elliott Kern: Hi Jan, sorry it took so long...but good up to chapter 10. The story is a good Jan, but suggest that you try reading your Story or Stories out loud, this will help you edit your work, check your grammar and punctuation, and tell you if you are on the right track for your story and plot.....

Laraine Smith: I was also a victim of verbal, physical, and sexual abuse by my father. One time, he threatened to beat me with a belt. This story enabled me to talk about it. Thank you. :)

Laraine Smith: This reminded me of a Hallmark Channel Christmas movie called "Help For The Holidays!" I love the little boy's innocence and love for the Christmas holiday! :)

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