On A Christmas Day

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Children

Blurb

What surprise do I get on Christmas Day, and who I get it from?

Chapter 1

On a Christmas Day,

I got a really sweet card.

A snowman sent it.

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pencil: It is all about love and kindness and good worthy things winning in the end. Emotionally very charged and very nice to feel people over coming their circumstances.I also thought too much like a feel good magazine style.

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pencil: I thought there was some errors for example the way the teachers did not pick up about the family's predicament but on the whole it was a very good story and I enjoyed it. The thing which would have made sense to me would have been if the children stole the bottles and the money as Jon was the ...

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jenneyescoto: I'm only six chapters in, yet I'm already hooked. It didn't start too slow nor too fast. It has just enough background information to keep the plot going in a decent pace. There are just some minor grammar mistakes and phrasing that could be easily corrected. Other than that, I'm really enjoying ...

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chariethomas7: I love the plot line on how it's not just how Elizabeth has to deal the her lover but her ex husband and child. I personally scared that she would get caught with her child but not Ben. I would love if this story can continue. The ending is making me want more.

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graceeming: I thought the whole story form the beginning was captivating, it really gave you the hunger that you were longing for in a story. Yes the end was not something that I enjoyed, but I recommend this to anyone that enjoys fantasy of this type.

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