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Come to Navy Pier!

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Children

Blurb

What will there be at Navy Pier?

Chapter 1

Come to Navy Pier!

There is much to celebrate!

There are festivals!

Skies are darkening,

And the fun is soon to start!

Golden stars prevail!

Miss Rikki Tomboy,

She is spinning in the air,

And she is flying!

She sees the fireworks!

They are flowers in the sky!

They are palm trees, too!

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