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Come to Navy Pier!

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Poetry


What will there be at Navy Pier?

Chapter 1

Come to Navy Pier!

There is much to celebrate!

There are festivals!

Skies are darkening,

And the fun is soon to start!

Golden stars prevail!

Miss Rikki Tomboy,

She is spinning in the air,

And she is flying!

She sees the fireworks!

They are flowers in the sky!

They are palm trees, too!

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Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!

Sara Huppman: My only pet peeve was that there were spelling errors. In one of the last chapters there was a mistake it said Melanie handed the hanky back to Chrystal. It was supposed to be Jess. Great book great plot. Didn't need some of the references to modern day culture like the line about frozen. If ther...

eggs3447: Good luck winning the contest! I liked the writing and ideas. I hope you enjoyed writing it.-RoseSpecktor

William Elliott Kern: Hi Jan, sorry it took so long...but good up to chapter 10. The story is a good Jan, but suggest that you try reading your Story or Stories out loud, this will help you edit your work, check your grammar and punctuation, and tell you if you are on the right track for your story and plot.....

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Laraine Smith: I was also a victim of verbal, physical, and sexual abuse by my father. One time, he threatened to beat me with a belt. This story enabled me to talk about it. Thank you. :)

Laraine Smith: This reminded me of a Hallmark Channel Christmas movie called "Help For The Holidays!" I love the little boy's innocence and love for the Christmas holiday! :)

Fiona Stubley: Very well written, interesting content, looking forward to more books. The author has an individual style which they should be proud of. Keeps the reader interested. Please read this you won't be disappointed.

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beaded_elephant: I love this story, I love how intricate and in-depth the characters and their relationships with each other are. The plot of this story is really good, you won't want to stop reading.

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