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Come to Navy Pier!

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Poetry

Blurb

What will there be at Navy Pier?

Chapter 1

Come to Navy Pier!

There is much to celebrate!

There are festivals!

Skies are darkening,

And the fun is soon to start!

Golden stars prevail!

Miss Rikki Tomboy,

She is spinning in the air,

And she is flying!

She sees the fireworks!

They are flowers in the sky!

They are palm trees, too!

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eggs3447: Good luck winning the contest! I liked the writing and ideas. I hope you enjoyed writing it.-RoseSpecktor

William Elliott Kern: Hi Jan, sorry it took so long...but good ...read up to chapter 10. The story is a good Jan, but suggest that you try reading your Story or Stories out loud, this will help you edit your work, check your grammar and punctuation, and tell you if you are on the right track for your story and plot.....

crissy: Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifu...

Melissa Orruego: I read this story and found it quite enjoyable. I like the twist on the usual were-wolf story. It was well written and had a happy ending.

Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use www.grammarcheck.net. I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!

Fiona Stubley: Very well written, interesting content, looking forward to more books. The author has an individual style which they should be proud of. Keeps the reader interested. Please read this you won't be disappointed.

Laraine Smith: I was also a victim of verbal, physical, and sexual abuse by my father. One time, he threatened to beat me with a belt. This story enabled me to talk about it. Thank you. :)

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