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You're Exceptional!

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Poetry


Inspiration came from the song “My Sweet Child,” which is from Dennis DeYoung’s musical adaptation of “101 Dalmatians” by B.T. McNicholl.

Chapter 1

You appeared to me out of nowhere!

Your magical grin brought tears to my eyes!

When you don’t feel magical,

It breaks my heart!

In your mother’s eyes,

There is nothing wrong with you!

Be proud of yourself,

The way I am of you!

In the time to come,

You will be able to know!

You’re exceptional!

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John E. WordSlinger: I like this story a lot, I admire the mix of modernistic things in the story. Brilliantly written from beginning to the end. thank you... John

Laraine Smith: This reminded me of a Hallmark Channel Christmas movie called "Help For The Holidays!" I love the little boy's innocence and love for the Christmas holiday! :)

beaded_elephant: I love this story, I love how intricate and in-depth the characters and their relationships with each other are. The plot of this story is really good, you won't want to stop reading.

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