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Haikus For Autumn

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Children

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Inspiration came from Getty Images.

Chapter 1

(POEM #1) Let’s Visit Japan!

The leaves of autumn,

They are just like orange stars!

Let’s visit Japan!

(POEM #2) Spaghetti Sauce!

In a land of trees,

Leaves look like spaghetti sauce!

What a miracle!

(POEM #3) Leaves Glow In the Dark!

Leaves glow in the dark,

And red is the brightest shade!

God loves His crayons!

(POEM #4) A Haiku for Red Leaves!

Red leaves are cherries!

Red leaves are so very bright!

They’re ripe tomatoes!

(POEM #5) Riding On A Train

Riding on a train,

I see a rainbow of leaves,

Both orange and red!

(POEM #6) Trees Look Like Flowers!

Trees look like flowers,

With their dark shades of orange,

And their shades of red!

(POEM #7) Let’s Go To the Lake!

Let’s go to the lake!

The leaves glow like Christmas lights!

I love orange shades!

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William Elliott Kern: Hi Jan, sorry it took so long...but good ...read up to chapter 10. The story is a good Jan, but suggest that you try reading your Story or Stories out loud, this will help you edit your work, check your grammar and punctuation, and tell you if you are on the right track for your story and plot.....

Laraine Smith: This reminded me of a Hallmark Channel Christmas movie called "Help For The Holidays!" I love the little boy's innocence and love for the Christmas holiday! :)

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