Steve Heim

Nashville

Lifelong dreamer and lover of the water. I live on one of my three boats and look forward to traveling full time on the many waterways of North America and beyond.

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Just read the prologue

I just was getting in a quick read to see what caught my attention. Your prologue was great as it held my attention the entire time (which I might add is hard to do). I am interested and will read the rest when I get a chance. I could picture exactly what was happening through your writing. I look forward to reading your chapters soon. Good stuff!

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Good Read

I am a boat guy so when I saw your picture of the ship it caught my attention. I intended to read just a few paragraphs but then I was to chapter 6. It held my attention and I enjoyed the story. Your writing is easy to follow. Keep up the good work!

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Grabbed my attention

I enjoyed reading what you have written. The only negative I have was for me personally, that first chapter went on and on. I was thinking the chapter was going to end but then it didn't. That being said, I still enjoyed what you wrote very much. Love the picture you used for your cover also. This sounds like a lot of personal experience which I feel makes the best writing. That's how I write and my story is all my life except of course for the killing part. Ha.

I really enjoyed your work. I look forward to reading more!

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Enjoying so far!

I was just doing a quick search and came across Alice Awakened. I read the first three chapters and I am really enjoying everything so far. It has held my attention and I would read more but I need to work on mine so I can stay ahead and get my 50,000 words done by the end of November in this contest.

Your work is easy to read and easy to follow what exactly is happening. WE all make assumptions so I have made a few on what will be happening as the story develops so it will be interesting to see if any of my assumptions are correct.

Really good writing. I look forward to reading more.

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Grabbed my attention

Interesting idea you have going here. I enjoyed what you have written so far. Neat idea!

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