Could not stop reading!
I have to be honest and tell you that I'm not a fan of alien stories, but this book sucked me right in! Your characters, the storyline, the suspense - I could not stop reading! My only criticism is that the punctuation and sentence structure could use some work, but I'm a secretary in my "real life," so those things stick out to me like a sore thumb. Your WRITING itself was wonderful, and for the most part, I was able to overlook the punctuation/sentence structure issues since the story WAS so good! Your characters were relatable and well-developed, and the suspense was perfectly timed. Can't wait to read more!
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