Overall Rating
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Could not stop reading!

I have to be honest and tell you that I'm not a fan of alien stories, but this book sucked me right in! Your characters, the storyline, the suspense - I could not stop reading! My only criticism is that the punctuation and sentence structure could use some work, but I'm a secretary in my "real life," so those things stick out to me like a sore thumb. Your WRITING itself was wonderful, and for the most part, I was able to overlook the punctuation/sentence structure issues since the story WAS so good! Your characters were relatable and well-developed, and the suspense was perfectly timed. Can't wait to read more!

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.