RubyonWings

Selangor, Malaysia.

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Had me on my toes!

The Kingdom of Archer's First Book - I find the author's writing style beautiful for poems/prose. I could feel the immense emotion from the words as they were flying off my screen. It was something deeply felt, and am quite sure the author may have felt something similar his/herself to have described it so perfectly. The feeling of hopelessness, desperation, and most of all, depression. The plot was overall unique, the ending was to be expected since this is a part of a series. I love how it all came together, but it was slightly lengthy due to the double-perceptive writing. An advice would be for you to split each chapter into half, half in Lyric's perception, and the other half in Parker's. It won't seem too cluttered that way. More effort could go into editing the typos, as well as the overall format of the story because some of the punctuation and spacing were confusing. Other than that, this book had me overwhelmed with emotions. Looking forward to the next one, kudos ;)

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Finished it in a day!

For starters, the concept of Hleo is new and a breath of fresh air. Descriptions and adjectives well thought-out, bringing out the background and setup of the entire story very beautifully. Loved the character development, especially on Ethan. I feel like I'm reading a professional edited and published book, very well polished and the flow to it is exceptional!

I was hoping that the main character would stand out more compared to a normal high-school girl (personality-wise), but that's my personal taste! A little on the down side is that the plot's overall up's and down's can be quite easily predicted, and slightly cliche. Some parts dragged on a bit too much for my tastes, as I prefer plots that go straight to the point. But overall, great book!

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