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Real Life

The book covers the coming of age of Tiffany, her search for love and struggles in life. Coming from a very big family, she needs to become independent from an early age. Out on the streets at 18, after an abortion, and the suicide of her former lover, she finds herself in the hands of a pimp. The first man she truly loves, but who beats her, throws her out and then is killed before her eyes. Traumatised by experiences too difficult to deal with for a young girl, she ends up in the arms of a much older man who reluctantly gives her a child. But an episode of violence is enough for Tiffany to take her son and move from LA to San Francisco. Here her work life soars while her personal life spirals. At 22 she finds Piper who gives her all the fun she craves, but he comes from low life and he is trouble. The death of her son’s father propels her into the fatal mistake of marrying Piper. But the night before her wedding she meets Noah and it is true love at first sight. But they are not meant to be together. Five years of abusive marriage with Piper leave Tiffany traumatised. Despite threats from his family she manages to leave Piper. Picking up the pieces of her life again, for her son’s sake, she meets Zane who loves her and wants to marry her despite knowing about her past and being aware that her heart really only belongs to Noah. Tiffany accidentally bumps into Noah again, 5 years after their first encounter. The chemistry is the same and she knows this is real love. He had waited for her, but was now in a relationship, so their lives are not meant to be together. Their love is so profound, Tiffany knows they will always love each other. But her son needs a father and she needs security. Noah is expecting a child too, so she accepts Zane as her second husband. Noah understands this and lets her go. But she will always be the only love of his life. When 10 years later he is killed in an accident, Tiffany breaks down. Zane’s companionship helps her through the hurt and she understands that love comes in different forms. Zane is worthy of her love, but it is a different love than the one she has for Noah, the only man she found peace with.
The book follows Tiffany’s ups and downs and hard realities and show how difficult her life has been. But the real essence is that there is one love in everyone’s life which is stronger than anything and will conquer any adversity. This love will always be there, no matter what. Tiffany, at 63, is still in love with the only man she ever really fell for.
A lesson of life and love, written in the real language. If you have found your real love in life, then you will understand the message much better. If not, then keep looking…

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interesting plot

the plot seems interesting. The verb tenses need to be checked and characters need to be introduced a bit better. I guess you are still in the process of writing, so review will come later. Keep at it! you are doing well!

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gripping

engaging plot and excellent writing style which keeps you gripped. Well done!

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Plot is interesting

The author builds the background of the main character well and opens up the story to several possible plots. The language is a bit cumbersome at times, but I expect it will get better as the text gets edited. Well done!

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first two chapters

I reviewed the first two chapters of Forever. The style is quick and crisp, which l like. Grammar, spelling and punctuation need to be looked at. The story so far is good, but it needs to develop into something different from the usual pattern, If you can do this, you'll have a great book. Keep writing, you are doing well :)

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Punchy

Although it is not my kind of read, I have to say I got quite into it! I love the opening, with full on action and your style is clean and straight to the point. Well done!

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brilliant!

I have read up to chapter 4 so far and really enjoyed it! I like the way you show and not tell and you wave information about the characters within the plot. Your writing style is easy to follow and you use the perfect expressions for a teenage girl. I applaud you for that! I am also glad to read a real life novel about Muslims, very refreshing. I shall continue reading it as I am really enjoying it. Well done!

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Providence

I read the first 6 chapters in one go. I love the easy writing style and the way the characters come alive without pushy descriptions. I like the POV changes and definitely will carry on reading. Well done!

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loved it!

I read everything that was available and hope you will post the rest of the story.

I enjoyed the plot and you have a very good writing voice. I loved the way the characters are so clearly pictured. Well done!

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