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I love Rage, he is such a unique character.

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2/5 stars overall

Lots of the "I'm not like other girls" cliche.

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Not Excited

The plot is certainly cliche, but I don't think that's always a bad thing. I know I've enjoyed numerous cliche books that have really blown me away, either because of a unique twist or great writing style.

However, the sentence structure in this book is not great, and neither is the grammar. I find myself having to re-read sentences to fully understand what the author is trying to convey. The writing style is relatively boring, and there really isn't a satisfying flow to the sentences.

Also, I noticed that the author sometimes writes Silvic and other times it's Slivic. It may seem like a small detail but it comes across really sloppy and unprofessional. I know I had issues like that when I first started writing so I understand, but it's a beginner mistake that needs to be edited.

Overall not the worst, but the plot isn't unique enough to make me want to read through the poor/ boring writing.

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