Rachel Esdaille

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whew what a read!!!!

From the moment I started reading this book I couldn't stop. There were twists and turns everywhere, it was a nonstop action novel with a lot of unexpected forks in the road. Although it was a little too much death and dying for me I still enjoyed it. The writing of the book was absolutely beautiful, I found myself saying I wish I can write like her.

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A book that every woman should read

This book is totally phenomenal from beginning to end. I was sorry to say goodbye to the characters in this novel. It really tackled some hard big issues such as how we view ourselves as women and young girls. This is not just another beauty pageant book where a girl enters is the winner of a beauty pageant. This novel goes so much deeper down to the core of who we are as women. This novel really should be published because people need the messages in it. Thanks for this wonderful read.

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Great story

This was a great story, however, it needs a lot of editing work the plot and characters were absolutely but you couldn't really see how excellent the story is because of the many many errors of grammar and spelling. The constant switching of tenses was a problem too. Grammarly is a great program to help get you started. It's free and I think it would help you a lot. If English is not your first language I know it may be hard to write in in it well. My suggestion would be to get someone who speaks English as their first language to help you with your errors because this story is really good with a bit of polishing it would be great.. Don't give up on writing spelling and grammar errors can always be fixed. Take care

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looooo0ved it!!!

wow!!! what can I say about this book it had me going through every emotion. It addressed so many relevant issues about culture and race which I was expecting. I was actually sorry to say goodbye to these characters I could relate to that so many ways. Thank you for writing such a story

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Simply phenomenal

Wow what do I say after reading this story. There are not words it is engaging at every turn I love the characters and the story line is top-notch. Thank you for writing such an exceptional story. For any editor who is reading this I don't care how many read this story is getting it needs to be published. People out there to see messages like this about treasuring people before it's too late and say things we are afraid to say and conquering our fears and stepping out of our comfort zone. This book is well worth the read I would recommend it to anyone no matter who you are what stage of life you're at you will get something from this book.

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Good start

When I first found out about this story I was intrigued so I started reading it. I couldn't get through it because of all the grammatical errors and stuff in it. I know how difficult it is to be a young writer but if you just keep working at it you will get better. Writing is a craft which needs to be perfected. My suggestion would be to write every day and to get someone to check your work. Don't give up the ideas are there it is just the technical aspects of grammar tenses and spelling that need to be worked on.

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