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Plot
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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Well Done

I quite enjoyed the story and it covers my favourite genre. Not a criticism, but a little help when you use their names always capitalise the first letter. Perhaps a little in your first chapter a little more of the main character, what she looks like etc. just so we can imagine the image of her while reading. Wonderful story.
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