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Another Great Adventure

I may actually like this story more than the first, I loved seeing the sisters develop more as individuals, the paths they took and the people they met.. My favorite scene was probably the dinner scene with Sophie and Hertha, the imagery and the dialogue was great. I loved that the first and last chapter was in Emma's perspective, we still don't know much about her but I love her character so much. I can't wait for the third book to find out more. Another great job!

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A Wonderful Adventure

This story was fun, but got surprisingly dark at times (which isn't bad at all, I loved that nightmarish creature you created). All of the characters were well developed and likable, the sisters have a great relationship. The worlds that you created were very imaginative, I loved the mystery surrounding Emma Montgomery and I'm definitely going to be reading the sequel. Great job!

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Simple but interesting

I stumbled upon this story and thought it was a fun, easy read. My only suggestion is to break up the paragraphs since I found myself losing track of where I was. Other than that, good job!

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